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2018考研英语:考研英语写作常见四大错误

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考研英语作文无论是大作文和小作文 都有一条评分标准,语言准确,它的意思从标点,措辞,到语法结构都应该是合适的正确的。这也是作文的一个底线要求,在此基础上需要各位同学做到,词汇的丰富和生动形象,句式结构的多变,体现出对英语的驾驭能力。但是语言准确,却是很多同学最为头疼的问题,因为语言准确直接决定了一篇作文所属的归档。那同学们常犯的错误有啥呢?今天,为大家总结以下几种类型




2018考研英语:考研英语写作常见四大错误


一、一个简单句出现多个谓语

1. There are two pictures show something.

There be 句型中谓语动词就是be 动词,如果需要出现其他动词,建议用非谓语动词,to do ,或者doing, to do 表达目的,以及未发生的动作,doing,表达正在发生或者伴随的动作。

所以此句正确写法为, There are two pictures show ing something.

2. Parents want most is our care and company.

同理,此句,出现了两个谓语动词,want is ,多谓语,除了可以删除一个动词,改成简单句,也可以加连词,变成一个从句,此句,也可以有两种改法。

第一种,want 变成wanting ,doing结构做主语,people 则是wanting 的逻辑主语, 所以,此句可以改成非常高大上的,独立主格。

Parents wanting most is our care and company.

也可以改成,主语从句

What Parents want most is our care and company.

 

二、错误搭配

We should be grateful our parent……

……感恩,句子表达应该为,be grateful to sb for sth

所以,此句正常表达是We should be grateful to our parent……

 

三、词性混淆

Young people can`t always keep their parents company, because work or something.

在词句子中,because 为连词,连词需要连接句子,而此句子中,because 之后只有名词, 所以,此处应该改为,because of, 此外根据句意,something 后面应该接一个else.

此句正确表达是,Young people can`t always keep their parents company, because of work or something else.

 

四、无主句

1.As is vividly depicted in the photo that four persons are playing a football game.

此句子中,as,为连词,that也是连词,所以as that之后均为从句,那此句的问题正是,全都是主句,无从句。建议删掉一个连词,保留一个作为主句。

此句正确表达是:As is vividly depicted in the photo, four persons are playing a football game.

2.The development of Chinese economy, which has offered aboundant time and money to visit museums.

此句中,主句只剩 the development of Chinese economy, 无谓语,which 之后全是从句,所以词句,需要把which 删掉,让has offered 作谓语。

正确表达The development of Chinese economy has offered aboundant time and money to visit museums.



  

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